Flowers

[rajjayaraj]

Had a play with my flash last night, here are the pictures, used PS to re size and change it to B&W.ImageUploadedByTapatalk1395903286.058296.jpg
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[Stan]

Re: Flowers

Neither really work for me Raj - the first has too much background clutter, woulf have been worth trying to isolate the main bloom and then cropping not so tight on the right - as it is at the moment the bloom is almost falling out of the frame. The second shot again is really too tight and for me too much is in the shadow

Stan

[tesarver]

Re: Flowers

Of the 2 the 1st is the best, but would concur with Stan's critique.

Tom

[rajjayaraj]

Re: Flowers

Of the 2 the 1st is the best, but would concur with Stan's critique.

Tom

Thanks Tom

[rajjayaraj]

Re: Flowers

Neither really work for me Raj - the first has too much background clutter, woulf have been worth trying to isolate the main bloom and then cropping not so tight on the right - as it is at the moment the bloom is almost falling out of the frame. The second shot again is really too tight and for me too much is in the shadow

Stan

Thanks Stan, both the shots were a replica of something i saw in one of the magazine and i am pleased that i could create the same effect, may be i should have explained this. I do see your point.

[JaKS_Foto]

Re: Flowers

It's unusual for monochrome to work with flowers or plant subjects, but No2 is a super shot

[rajjayaraj]

Re: Flowers

It's unusual for monochrome to work with flowers or plant subjects, but No2 is a super shot

Thanks JaKS_Foto.